After reading Keiths Byermans’s essay about “The Colour Purple” I was left perplexed and questioning what his argument towards the novel even was. It seemed that Byerman had simply spewed his thoughts onto paper and disregarded any grammatical and spelling rules. His connection between paragraphs and points was a maze to navigate leaving me lost and confused as to what he was trying to say or prove. Eventually, he repeated his words in different contexts enough that I was able to understand the gist of his argument.
Byermans biggest flaw in my opinion was the lack of general organization in his essay, it was a cluster of plot summaries and random points that did not have concrete evidence to support his ideas. Overall I believe Byermans organization and spelling errors made his essay’s points much less respectable costing him the loss of readers’ interest.