After Receiving my feedback, I noticed I made many simple errors that could have been avoided if I had organized my writing better.
The Mock exam taught me that analyzing the type of text presented is crucial to making assertions. In Diversions Upon Greek Ground, I missed the dates at the beginning of each paragraph that could have helped me further analyze the text.
I am satisfied with my progress; however, there is still room for improvement. For the May exam, I will practice by reading literary works and getting familiar with complex text types.