I feel like everyone did well.
I myself did not expect myself to do well. I had prepared and read it back to myself (why I didn’t need any notes), but without notes I was pretty lost for words at points. I repeated stuff such as “basically…” and “so what that means is…”. This was probably time wasting. My presentation was marked as “hard to follow” and so probably next time I shall use a powerpoint presentation. While the powerpoint won’t be descript, will be tersely focusing what I am talking about, like “REASON”, “EMOTION”, “SOCIAL SCIENCES”. I also think that maybe I will do something similar for my actual TOK presentation, since I found some interesting psych proposal that raises TOK questions.