This poem called “Not Waving but Drowning”. Written by Stievie Smith. We have been reading in English class. I think this poem is pretty interesting. She writes in a different way than other poem writers. Some of the words for example chap I don’t really get but I like this poem. Because is short and easy to read. After I know when teacher ask students and told me. The poem was about on man was joking to everywhere. Then he was drowning but he’s friend thought it’s joke. So he died.

Short but it catches my attention.
I like how you explained the story that the poem is telling. But you still need to improve on some basic grammars.
um… okay?…:D
You could have asked the meaning of words you don’t get. Mr. Macknight asked us many times of there are any words we don’t understand. When you are talking about a word, it is better that you put the word in italics.
i agree with DA ye i like this post, however like what i said to aimee it is top short