My first impression was in her face i could read out of her time that she spent on hard working. I could feel some weird feeling, it was her wisdom, from something deep inside. I was worried maybe she is a boring woman, but she wasn’t boring at all, she was humorous. Her laugh was funny, it was really funny, it was like man’s laugh.
She worked in the factory for 10 years in factory. She was really young while she was working in the factory.
She spent very long time in factory , and didn’t get chance to be educated, but she had her value, so she could write good stories.
nice post. needs more detail
Interesting use of vocabulary and good job expressing your opinion